Did you really "create" your target audience? Or establish/identify?
Typo: "no exclusively".
You need more detail in 3rd and 4th paragraphs - linking more to the actual elements you employed as a result of 'understanding' your target audience.
You could also include some more specific feedbacl/comments you received during the editing stages. Have you got an email/text from the artist himself - that would be great to include!
Did you really "create" your target audience? Or establish/identify?
ReplyDeleteTypo: "no exclusively".
You need more detail in 3rd and 4th paragraphs - linking more to the actual elements you employed as a result of 'understanding' your target audience.
You could also include some more specific feedbacl/comments you received during the editing stages. Have you got an email/text from the artist himself - that would be great to include!